tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post3612991904508838333..comments2023-07-01T17:51:52.519+02:00Comments on Have genes will travel: StellabusUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-6182088536796937382010-03-18T00:57:15.164+01:002010-03-18T00:57:15.164+01:00I liked this on first reading but love it on the s...I liked this on first reading but love it on the second! Apart from being a descriptive vignette and flouting atmospheric detail it has darker undercurrents.I think it's a real neat piece of writing.Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-21824792830801253452010-03-17T16:36:51.802+01:002010-03-17T16:36:51.802+01:00What on earth IS she wearing? Wow.
That pink bunn...What on earth IS she wearing? Wow.<br /><br />That pink bunny of yours gets around!Reya Mellickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076092659507965666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-8455270013424751592010-03-17T11:42:18.545+01:002010-03-17T11:42:18.545+01:00wow! fantastic! I was hooked. I absolutely love mo...wow! fantastic! I was hooked. I absolutely love moment in time prose thingies, just swift, snippets of characters and scenarios and possibility, this is so cool! :-DBatteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-31091798359459235152010-03-16T00:09:50.753+01:002010-03-16T00:09:50.753+01:00You were able to take this seriously - one of only...You were able to take this seriously - one of only two I've read so far who managed to do that! I raise my glass to you! This is good.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-47198728057631859992010-03-15T23:33:32.600+01:002010-03-15T23:33:32.600+01:00Nice story-telling with this. I enjoyed the "...Nice story-telling with this. I enjoyed the "what on earth is she wearing"; it really summed up the experience.<br /><br />(I hope you'll forgive my liberties with the French language in my piece.)<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-33667501359599086902010-03-15T18:48:28.299+01:002010-03-15T18:48:28.299+01:00Oh, I liked this, so different from all the funny ...Oh, I liked this, so different from all the funny ones. I think I've been in bars like that in deepest, darkest Brum. Great atmosphere.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-28884646226643898282010-03-15T16:12:12.450+01:002010-03-15T16:12:12.450+01:00Yes, the lottery tickets!
The prompt took most of ...Yes, the lottery tickets!<br />The prompt took most of us down the humorous route but this was very different and very atmospheric.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-16772642194094142932010-03-15T14:04:56.124+01:002010-03-15T14:04:56.124+01:00I tried starting with the lines, but never got any...I tried starting with the lines, but never got any farther. They have too much character of their own.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-56652111124296609032010-03-15T13:59:30.992+01:002010-03-15T13:59:30.992+01:00Really interesting, first one I've read that&#...Really interesting, first one I've read that's taken the lines just as a start point, and made them real life. Loved it.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-60008790775311788922010-03-15T12:58:31.739+01:002010-03-15T12:58:31.739+01:00Yeh, I'm with Swiss, needs reading again.I lik...Yeh, I'm with Swiss, needs reading again.I like it though, you took the prompt a mile away from home and went with it.A real snapshot/portrait/slice. Trés bien!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-20472362351818808362010-03-15T11:55:47.783+01:002010-03-15T11:55:47.783+01:00i like the evocation in this so much i'm actua...i like the evocation in this so much i'm actually going to have to wait and read it again and get back to youswisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924594772578153947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-43617937831995465342010-03-15T10:48:04.734+01:002010-03-15T10:48:04.734+01:00Full of atmosphere, an interesting take...Full of atmosphere, an interesting take...Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-13958324050999969832010-03-15T10:36:00.009+01:002010-03-15T10:36:00.009+01:00I really like this. You managed the assignment an...I really like this. You managed the assignment and also captured me as a reader.Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-72562182166086047742010-03-15T10:06:09.994+01:002010-03-15T10:06:09.994+01:00When your imagination takes off from a cue -- phot...When your imagination takes off from a cue -- photographically or poetically -- its always worth watching. Great poem. I knew that bar well.Bagman and Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06760203276065466927noreply@blogger.com