tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post3956644294878867919..comments2023-07-01T17:51:52.519+02:00Comments on Have genes will travel: Monday apple cartUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-26200892223603936042010-08-11T23:56:23.399+02:002010-08-11T23:56:23.399+02:00Ooh! I liked the apples one very much, but for me...Ooh! I liked the apples one very much, but for me, The Fairy really resonated. Starts so easy, but the progression to knowledge just rings so real, and that's a fabulous, tragic last seven lines. Loved it.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-18919457516495301332010-08-10T18:01:25.348+02:002010-08-10T18:01:25.348+02:00I love both of these! Apple blossoms are my favori...I love both of these! Apple blossoms are my favorite scent. The orchards nearby are just as you describe here. There is a very old apple tree in the woods next to my house, which I love to imagine came to be through the seeds of Johnny Appleseed. It's fruit feeds the deer. <br /><br />And your 'Fairy' poem is adorable! It was such fun watching the children's faces as they approached that fairy...probably with the identical realization in your poem. ; )Dr. Jeanne Irishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11277286531162894465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-53375794408846914812010-08-09T19:22:50.691+02:002010-08-09T19:22:50.691+02:00I love the waiting theme in the apple poem, really...I love the waiting theme in the apple poem, really built up nicely to a satisfying ending. I love the second though slightly more. I hate all the cutesy **** as well.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-39600145331611738732010-08-09T19:13:34.369+02:002010-08-09T19:13:34.369+02:00Beautifully written and have lots of different ide...Beautifully written and have lots of different ideas to think about, but I was distracted by your lovely header photo!!!Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-88189518416808897012010-08-09T18:14:26.919+02:002010-08-09T18:14:26.919+02:00I guess the second poem only really makes sense wh...I guess the second poem only really makes sense when you see the prompt photo of a little girl reaching up to one of those street mimes pretending to be a statue of a fairy.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-46392291077909247842010-08-09T16:20:49.684+02:002010-08-09T16:20:49.684+02:00Your apple poem reminds me of our tomatoes - it to...Your apple poem reminds me of our tomatoes - it took FOREVER for them to grow & ripen. We just ate the first one on Saturday. Good stuff.<br /><br />The fairy poem is fun - I get tricks played on my eyes all the time (I think I do it on purpose).The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-48040008571733429582010-08-09T15:09:54.617+02:002010-08-09T15:09:54.617+02:00Beautiful...
I want those apples.I have to test my...Beautiful...<br />I want those apples.I have to test my new toothpaste :)<br />Both the poems are superb...:)<br />I liked the ending of the second one.Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-12964775933884532672010-08-09T14:33:54.261+02:002010-08-09T14:33:54.261+02:00the fairy poem is the winner for me!!! steventhe fairy poem is the winner for me!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-37142822050789472672010-08-09T14:06:32.845+02:002010-08-09T14:06:32.845+02:00I did try to separate them, Mark. Reading poems on...I did try to separate them, Mark. Reading poems one after another is not something I like to do. The flavors get all mixed up. Like having lemon tea from the machine after somebody else chose tomato soup.<br />Not that I would chose either one of those!<br />Couldn't resist the fairy thing. Hate fairies and all that cutesy ****.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-86571572578362099002010-08-09T13:41:07.005+02:002010-08-09T13:41:07.005+02:00Two such different poems! Reading them one after t...Two such different poems! Reading them one after the other is like being on a roller coaster. The peaks and valleys of your emotional landscape.Bagman and Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06760203276065466927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4434099172039136838.post-41585803334444908602010-08-09T12:05:49.196+02:002010-08-09T12:05:49.196+02:00delicious!delicious!Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.com