i like haiku that break the rulesthey seem to say so much morein the same small space!steven
Haiku that misbehave! great!love the tartness and depth of our options- thanks.
I love baseball (I hope that's what the third line is about), but I'm fairly well exhausted watching two games a day (Reds & Braves). Heh.
Baseball! hahaha! I was wondering what this would look like without the three P-Jam photos in sight.Though it fits perfectly - the late summer games, riding bikes to the ballpark. Indeed, it could be about a single thing.If I were to write a poem about baseball, though, this would be far from it!
Your trifecta is marvelous!!
Aha! Three for one. Excellent!
Clever how you fit all 3 pictures in one little ole haiku! Well done.Here is mine: Repeat Echo
Very clever:-) but BASEBALL?? Rugby, please;-)
nice...cherries, baseball and bikes...that takes me back a few years...about 25...smiles. nice jam
NanU, our cherry trees are just now getting beautifully ripe, here. You're welcome to drop in. I liked your haiku. It's perfect.
NO baseball here. I hate baseball. The cracking is the smack of the rugby players colliding.
Wish I'd seen yours before I wrote mine!Very clever
It works! It works well!
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