the season for cherries is long gone
bicycles wait patiently
while players !crack! on the field
The Poetry Jam too, is filled with stuff stirred in together. Have some here. Spread it on your toast.
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i like haiku that break the rules
they seem to say so much more
in the same small space!
steven
Haiku that misbehave! great!
love the tartness and depth of our options- thanks.
I love baseball (I hope that's what the third line is about), but I'm fairly well exhausted watching two games a day (Reds & Braves). Heh.
Baseball! hahaha! I was wondering what this would look like without the three P-Jam photos in sight.
Though it fits perfectly - the late summer games, riding bikes to the ballpark. Indeed, it could be about a single thing.
If I were to write a poem about baseball, though, this would be far from it!
Your trifecta is marvelous!!
Aha! Three for one. Excellent!
Clever how you fit all 3 pictures in one little ole haiku! Well done.
Here is mine: Repeat Echo
Very clever:-) but BASEBALL?? Rugby, please;-)
nice...cherries, baseball and bikes...that takes me back a few years...about 25...smiles. nice jam
NanU, our cherry trees are just now getting beautifully ripe, here. You're welcome to drop in.
I liked your haiku. It's perfect.
NO baseball here. I hate baseball. The cracking is the smack of the rugby players colliding.
Wish I'd seen yours before I wrote mine!
Very clever
It works! It works well!
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