the impact of sunlight on my bare skin
the wind messing my hair
sand between my toes
I want to be there.
No flat photo will do.
This for the Poetry Jam. Join the jelly here!
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Oh man this is so true. The picture I used for my poem is a place I would LOVE to explore.
i keep waiting for transporters to be built...
love your photograph as well as your poem.
thank you for all of your kind assistance with the Jam. {smile}
dani ♥
Nicely done. Can I have your first line for my own? Make it the whole thing for that matter....well, I guess I do have it. Thanks, it's lovely. twinkly
This is like an un-prompt poem. Visual and sensual. Nice.
Exactly, Chris.
Sometimes I am 'prompted' to gag.
Bare skin? Plus sun bloc, please I burn easily. *smiles*
elegant words..
love it, pleasant imagery.
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