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Sunday, August 22, 2010

The Poetry Bus gets up early.

This week's Poetry Bus came with several destinations chosen by Chicorreal. I'm a bit early, but tomorrow I'm on the road! One last bit of vacation adventure before the term starts. I picked First Thoughts on waking in the morning.

6:45

Stop it Natalie
Stop it.
You cannot scratch through the window
Stop it.
I hate you
It isn't time yet
Is it really time?
Ten minutes more
Stop it Natalie
Oh alright fine!
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That would be a weekday, working morning of course.
The next one makes a tour of the early morning thoughts all around the household.
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First thoughts

Lemme eat! Lemme eat!
Lemme out! Lemme out!
wha?
is it morning?
I'll get up later.
PetmePetmePetmePetme
Another beautiful day!
I can hardly wait for a new adventure
Getta moveon, Lazybones, the sun is up!
It is not
shaddup
we're sleepin here.
It is too up
well, it's almost up
It's light out. A little.
Lemme in! Lemme in!
Lemme eat! Lemme eat!
PetmePetmePetmePetme
Ah, there's the coffee.
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with many thanks to Bandersnatch, Natalie, Sienne, Maurice, and the Laboratory Rats.
To catch the Poetry Bus, click here.
To find out what happened when the dinosaurs tried to eat Bandersnatch, click here.

9 comments:

Titus said...

I like them both, but the tour of thoughts really grabbed me! Character distilled.

Niamh B said...

great descriptive pieces, I don't know how you keep up with them all, I find one furry attention craving animal enough in the mornings! and then there's the dog too.

Erratic Thoughts said...

:D I liked both 6:45vers
They absolutely describe my mornings!...grr about the weekday though :D
Excellent:)

Doctor FTSE said...

Lots of Bus Passengers seem to have cat problems first thing. Yours sound a trifle OTT? Good post.

Peter Goulding said...

"It is too up" Brilliant observations!

Totalfeckineejit said...

Love the cat names and the feline/human dialogue.Made me smile, I lkies! Great header foto BTW

Argent said...

LOLLOLLOL! This is what I get in the mornings too! Bandersnatch is Gooooooorgeous!

nuts4fruits said...

so I finally figured out that the Poetry Bus is a virtual beast not a real poets-on-tour show :) yeah, I've been dizzy for a while. why do you ask?

Ann said...

your slug looks like a snake. The New Zealand ones don't have the spotting and are 1/2 inch to 1 inch.

But your geese and mine are the same. Same genes? LOL