Here's a second ride on TFE's Poetry Bus.
Heavy Freight
Across the desert
something is moving
.
At first it looked like a dark line
against the far hills
a geological feature in this country of fractures and upended layers.
.
From 30,000 feet you can look
down and see the roads
the towns
and the long straight scars
across the earth
.
Something's moving along one of those
A thin mile long
it flows down the canyon
and out across the flat wastes
.
Car after car after car
It carries steel
and coal
and goods
across the empty miles to Los Angeles.
.
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2 months ago
2 comments:
I like "a thin mile long" - it's a lonely kind of a poem. nice one.
This really gets the essence of those long long trains wending their way across a huge country. Liked "car after car after car"
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