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Monday, March 8, 2010

Poetry Train 2

Here's a second ride on TFE's Poetry Bus.
Heavy Freight

Across the desert

something is moving

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At first it looked like a dark line

against the far hills

a geological feature in this country of fractures and upended layers.

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From 30,000 feet you can look

down and see the roads

the towns

and the long straight scars

across the earth

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Something's moving along one of those

A thin mile long

it flows down the canyon

and out across the flat wastes

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Car after car after car

It carries steel

and coal

and goods

across the empty miles to Los Angeles.

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2 comments:

Niamh B said...

I like "a thin mile long" - it's a lonely kind of a poem. nice one.

Argent said...

This really gets the essence of those long long trains wending their way across a huge country. Liked "car after car after car"